Real Essays. Real Feedback.
These are actual essays written by Essay Edge students during practice sessions — Full-Length Tests and Topic-Based Challenges — with handwritten corrections, comments, and personalised feedback from Farees Sir. Download them to understand what top-scoring essay writing looks like at the UPSC Mains level.
About These Essays
Each PDF contains an essay written during the Essay Edge course along with Farees Sir's detailed corrections, margin comments, and structural feedback. These are shared with the students' permission to help current aspirants learn from real examples of improvement and high-scoring writing.
Simrandeep Kaur
Simran had to work exceptionally hard on essays, as it did not come naturally to her in the beginning. Her sincerity towards improvement was remarkable — she took every piece of personalised feedback seriously and gradually transformed her writing. The result was a jump in essay marks from 91 to 112, playing a crucial role in her securing AIR 15.
Jeenu Sri Jaswanth Chandra
Jaswanth's journey was defined by perseverance, consistency, and an exceptional ability to incorporate feedback. He never hesitated to work on his weaknesses and approached every personalised suggestion with sincerity. His relentless commitment to writing tests till the very end and refining his thought process with each attempt played a crucial role in his outstanding performance.
Nalaturu Sreekant Reddy
Sreekanth has been a natural at essay writing — lucid, poetic and deeply reflective. The way he addresses a topic is both elegant and effortless. His essays do not merely answer the question; they flow with emotion, clarity and philosophical depth while still remaining grounded in substance and structure.